YBR Haiku

Discussion in 'Ages 40+' started by anonymouse, Jul 12, 2013.

  1. anonymouse

    anonymouse New Member

    Sitting here alone
    Wanting to fondle my junk
    Stupid lizard brain


    Dedicated to all the guys with low counters.
     
  2. LTE

    LTE Master Of My Domain

    Sitting here alone
    Junk being ignored
    Lizard brain loses

    Sitting here alone
    Junk has given up
    Mammal brain in charge

    Harder than a rock
    Give no thought to M
    I am now a man
     
  3. LOGOS

    LOGOS Personal Best - 233 Days PMO-free

    As a low-counter guy (at the moment), I thank you.

    But LTE, you have a little more compositional work to do: Haiku's are 5-7-5! ;)
     
  4. LTE

    LTE Master Of My Domain

    Not in my universe. :)
     
  5. midge

    midge Guest

    Remaking his life
    Redefining poetry
    You go, LTE
     
  6. LTE

    LTE Master Of My Domain

    :)
     
  7. LOGOS

    LOGOS Personal Best - 233 Days PMO-free

    Awesome! ;D
     

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